Cold Kingdom Enterprise

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   Adam on October 3, 2012 at 5:32 pm

   Very descriptive story

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     Dfjohnston87 on October 3, 2012 at 5:37 pm

     He this is very descriptive!!!!

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       Gbaktis on October 3, 2012 at 5:40 pm

       Too descriptive

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   Dfjohnston87 on October 3, 2012 at 5:33 pm

   Omg this is an award winning piece of literature. Gold medal prize :’)

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     Adam on October 3, 2012 at 5:34 pm

     I know right like salut max

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       Dfjohnston87 on October 3, 2012 at 5:36 pm

       I would not be supposed if it was the same author

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         R.B. on October 4, 2012 at 10:34 am

         “surprised”

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       Mike hunt on October 3, 2012 at 5:40 pm

       Agreed

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   Dfjohnston87 on October 3, 2012 at 5:35 pm

   Award wining piece of literature. gold medal prize :’) BRAVO BRAVO Cold kingdom enterprise

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   The unknown enemy on October 3, 2012 at 5:35 pm

   Good

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   mark on October 3, 2012 at 5:35 pm

   Very good story

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     The unknown enemy on October 3, 2012 at 5:36 pm

     Too bad it’s only 50 words

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   Adam on October 3, 2012 at 5:36 pm

   Idk it still doesn’t beet salut max and mounted reuse 🙁

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     SALUT MAX! on October 3, 2012 at 5:45 pm

     Salut max is the second best story after this one :’)

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   Ryan on October 3, 2012 at 5:37 pm

   Yuum.

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     The unknown enemy on October 3, 2012 at 5:39 pm

     What’s that suppose to mean??

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   Adam on October 3, 2012 at 5:38 pm

   I love garden nomes

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     R.B. on October 4, 2012 at 10:35 am

     “Gnomes”

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   Jonathan Mccall16 on October 3, 2012 at 5:38 pm

   Cool story bro

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    Ryan Renaud16 on October 3, 2012 at 5:38 pm

    Yuum.

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    George.... on October 3, 2012 at 5:39 pm

    Way TOO long
    Other then that cool story bro

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12. 

    Michael Couture on October 3, 2012 at 5:39 pm

    This is a swag story 🙂

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    Gjgjgj on October 3, 2012 at 5:39 pm

    A very touching story kool story bro!!!!!!

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    Kyle Myers16 on October 3, 2012 at 5:39 pm

    I love dwarfs

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      Nicholas Farrow16 on October 3, 2012 at 5:41 pm

      I’m not sure why he made him a dwarf

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        R.B. on October 4, 2012 at 10:36 am

        A keen observation – why not a giant?

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    The_Epic_Face on October 3, 2012 at 5:39 pm

    Amazing just amazing!

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    Daniel on October 3, 2012 at 5:39 pm

    Absolutely tremendous story !!!! Amazing piece a literature bravo author bravo…..very descriptive I applaud you Cold kingdom enterprise

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    Award-Wining-Author on October 3, 2012 at 5:40 pm

    Most amazing 50 words I’ve ever heard! :’)

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18. 

    Brautigan lover on October 3, 2012 at 5:40 pm

    Richard Brautigan has outdone himself again… Great job!!!

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      R.B. on October 4, 2012 at 10:37 am

      Indeed he has Max, indeed he has.

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    Daniel on October 3, 2012 at 5:41 pm

    Meet me on the gee ecologist shawty

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20. 

    MarcoD on October 3, 2012 at 5:46 pm

    This story is too long for me!!!!!

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21. 

    Moussam on October 4, 2012 at 10:21 am

    Thrilled to see so many brilliant Brautigan enthusiasts.  -a literary Didact 

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22. 

    Robert Burns on October 4, 2012 at 10:28 am

    Once upon a time there was a gaggle of adolescent hoodlums who loved to make irratic comments on literary pieces, but their didact was such a tyrant, that  they only had time to write a few short words, before they vanished into jug-land forever…

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    Nick on October 7, 2013 at 3:03 pm

    I like dis storey 🙂

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24. 

    The overtime hacks on October 9, 2013 at 2:59 pm

    Hi

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25. 

    Wheelz on October 9, 2013 at 2:59 pm

    Not as good as mouette rieuse

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26. 

    Muurrrrr on September 10, 2014 at 2:50 pm

    Very delicious

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